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Apology |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
i know this rift between us is all my fault i misunderstood and overreacted to your words now it seems as if we may not see eye to eye i hope you know i'd do anything to make it right i just want to make peace by putting it in the past i am sorry i accept total responsibility i made it this way unintentionally i'd never set out to hurt you i care for you more than i can say please please hear me out here tonight i promise to learn from this if only you can find it in your heart to grant me forgiveness for wronging you i know i hurt you i am sorry with all my heart All writing comes |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
It takes courage to say those words, it takes understanding to accept them in the spirit meant, Then as an old man, I will say, please accept such a cry from the heart, this very day...gentle smile |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
when you really love someone, you always forgive, I'm sure this person has already done that because YOU are lovable. Kathleen Blake |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
You should not take all the blame onto yourself. I've learned that it's not always the fault of one person. There's always another side, and if that person has asked forgiveness, as you have, then you should forgive, and move on. This is a great poem, sorry for rambling, but it said a lot to me. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Lone Wolf...this is soft & tender...i hope you are forgiven...you admitted you're wrong...i hope you are forgiven...and can put this in the past...helen |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I understand this feeling so well...you've written it sincerely. Hope you get your one more chance! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You are human. You are a daughter of God. You are forgiven. Hugs, Karilea |
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autumn Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 44Maine |
To err is human, to forgive divine. How could they not forgive. |
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autumn Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 44Maine |
To err is human, to forgive divine. How could they not forgive. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Logan: Thank you, it does come from the heart. You are a wise man. Kathleen: You are right, this person has forgiven me. I just wanted to show them that I can admit when I am wrong. YOU are lovable yourself my friend. Thank you! PV: I take the blame because I was the cause of it. Both parties are sorry and it is now in the past. It does speak volumes. Thanks! Helen: I have been forgiven and know I always will be. Nothing will ever come between this person and I. In the past it goes! JLR: Got it!! Whoo Hoo!! Sunshine: Bless you! autumn: They are of the divine in my eyes and hold forgiveness in their heart. Thanks! All writing comes |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...how I long to hear these very words from one that has dealt me so much pain...it takes strength and character to stand in this vulnerable position...oh that others could be so strong... |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
personally, its hard for me to apologise to someone else and seek forgiveness so i shall applaud you for being so big-hearted to do so...  |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
It's always hard to say I'm sorry but when you do it set you free and makes you a better person. Loved this one! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Fancy: I hope you hear those words someday. I sense they would help bring closure to your suffering. It's not easy to show one's vulnerability, not for me anyway. Thanks and best of luck. faterider: Thank you, when it's important enough you'll do it. Trust me. walker: It sets you free and allows you to forgive yourself, which is just as important as the other person forgiving you. Thank you! All writing comes |
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