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The Day Our Hearts Touched...
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The Day Our Hearts Touched... |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
Of all the choices you could have made that day, You chose to send a message my way. The words I heard sounded so honest and sincere, they brought to my eye a tiny little tear. I knew I must try and find the man who had melted my heart without touching my hand. From the very first words it was so easy to do laughing and talking for hours with you!!! Your thoughts and feelings seemed so close to mine I felt I had known you for a very long time. Could it be that someone knew I had a need for a friend such as you? I believe an ANGEL knew just what to do when she brought me straight to you! It seems I felt her wings brush my cheek as I listened to the words you spoke, so sweet! You left me with a feeling of joy in my heart, but...I want to tell you my very favorite part! If for just a very few moments in time, I have felt your heart beating with mine. Where all this will lead, I cannnot say I just know I'll never forget that very special day!!! |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Fancy, Fancy, Fancy, proceed with caution!! Your heart is in trouble. Lovely words and lots of emotion. ME |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I read your encouragement to add "constructive critiques"...and wonder if "jet touch the heart..." is indicative of a play on words.... but this I liked, even if I were to think that this poem reflected your moment, then I would adhere to ME's impression as well... I enjoyed! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well done Fancy....I enjoyed this very much! Hope that things work out.  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I'm with M_E here. Many are not what they seem to be at first. Just be careful, it's a jungle out there! All writing comes |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Welcome to Passions! I like your screen name and enjoyed reading this open and honest dedication. Proceed with caution! "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Fancy~ Very nicely said. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Hope this all works out well. Joyce |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this very much...James |
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Hollowman Member
since 2001-06-01
Posts 117 |
mmm...this smells of internet love, well written Fancy and I really keep my fingers crossed that everything works out for you - It will, (Richy has been there, and knows the pain only too well of this sorta stuff), well gotta put finger to keyboard and write some more stuff! take care for now. Rich |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Fancy~ just quite lovely........and so sweet...I'll gladly add this to my library. I'm sure many can relate to it....... But I'd also advise you to be careful...... Thank you......and take care.....  ********************** It's only me.......only me |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...special thanks to each of you for your sincere and warm compliments...and Rich, no not an internet interaction, but close...a telephone acquaintance of quite some time ago...the best thing to come out of it was actually this writing...go figure it...lol |
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