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Hollowman
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since 2001-06-01
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0 posted 2001-06-17 12:41 PM



A fallen angel, some pixie dust
a dented heart, broken trust
Lovers tiff, love now gone
black hole, where once love shone

Strong as an Ox, weak as a fly
Did love really say goodbye?
Think of the battle, think of the pain
Did he really give sunshine
or was it just rain?

If sun, then love will win the day
If rain, then its better gone away
You will find the strength to see this through
its natural to feel a little blue

A dash of patience, a scoop of time
And once again your sun will shine
No fallen angels, no pixie dust
no dented heart, no broken trust.
Rich-


© Copyright 2001 Richard Pardoe - All Rights Reserved
Fancy
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 189
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1 posted 2001-06-17 12:54 PM


Rich...you reached right into the depths of my heart and soul and gave to me exactly what my sinking spirits needed...wonderful insight...you have stolen my heart and admiration forever...all I can give when Thank You just isn't enough...
Hollowman
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2 posted 2001-06-17 01:01 PM



- you are most welcome! :0)

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