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Kiss me.
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Kiss me. |
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Hollowman Member
since 2001-06-01
Posts 117 |
Kiss me quickly, kiss me slow and on my lips leave after-glow join with me, become one at night hold me close, hold me tight Romance at dawn, lust at dusk show me the glass pillars of trust Let me be, let me show the feelings that you desire to know Entwine our passions mix our dreams no gap between us baby it seems I'll be yours, you be mine red hot lips cooled with wine If looks could kill, then I am dead shot by cupids arrow through my head Be my nurse, feed me love fit together, like hands in gloves. Rich- |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
It is very nice and cool written . "Be my nurse, feed me love" is Excellent. I like it very much  I love to nice poetry. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
It is very beautiful written. "Be my nurse, feed me love" is very nice. I like it very much...... I love to nice poetry. |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...glass pillars of trust... how magnificently the put so much truth in so few words...lovely...a line to be remembered.. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Hollowman, I like this It flowed really well .. ~sighs~ I wish I had the knack for ryhme.  TaraB |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Enjoyed reading this... *smiles* ~Tier |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
"glass pillars of trust" - if only it wasn't shattered so easily. I liked this. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enjoyed your words *s and rhyme ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I too enjoy the words and rhyme..also enjoyed the underlying ideas... |
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