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vandana
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0 posted 2001-05-22 06:28 PM



Can't Stop loving you,
I just can't stop loving you,
Spending a time with you,
And loving you,
Since I saw your face,
I knew
from the start,
you were the right person for me,
And I knew from the moment I saw,                                                 I wouldn't help falling In love with you,                                                  I can't stop loving you                                                     Since we became friends,                                              Since then,                                                   I had been dreaming of you,                                                 Day and night,                                                  I just can't stop loving you,                                                   I just stop thinking of you,                                                      

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 05-22-2001).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-05-22 06:47 PM


Vandana,
Geesss I didn't know you felt that way. Enjoyed the read.

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-05-22 06:47 PM


now I have the song by Ray Charles in my head!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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3 posted 2001-05-23 03:00 PM


vandana...i liked this i liked the style of this...like thoughts through the day of loving someone...nice...helen
Sven
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4 posted 2001-05-23 08:25 PM


very interesting vandana. . .

I like it. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-05-24 01:49 AM


VanDana~
Your poetry reads from the heart ~
Your heart is a volume of beauty ~

Thank you for sharing ~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

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6 posted 2001-05-24 01:53 AM


Love's token a measure of hope. Great pen, I'll keep.

let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush...

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