Open Poetry #14 |
Duet |
Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Our Song I’ll sing the melody you join in harmony a song of bittersweet we both know complete about dreams undone living a life of shun secrets held from the light betrayed to live in fright yet, now a true friend behold a rare thing we hold Maybe it was circumstance or perhaps by some odd chance that one day I brought along to this place my silent song a song now writing lyrics to by not just one, but two, with you in that we hear a common sound welling from a common ground to look for you I did not come but friends indeed we have become duet by 1slick_lady & Krawdad "As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Very nicely done, the two of you...gentle smile |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Standing ovation...take your bows! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Well written both you. Enjoyed the read. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nicely done.......I commend both of you! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful work to both of you! All writing comes |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A lovely collaboration ... applause to you both for these tender sentiments! Best wishes, /Kit |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
thank you all...it was fun...we will do it again...and ty k...helen |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
thanks again to all who stopped by glad you liked...we'll try another soon and ty h for the lead |
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