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Sail Out To Sea
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Sail Out To Sea |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Would you come a little bit closer and sit right next to me Let’s take a little adventure to the midnight land and sea Flying through the heavens in this sky of distant stars Cruise on invisible ships and transparent flying cars A visit to an alien world of a cosmic fantasyland Laying on their beaches with three moons and purple sand Watch their water glitter from the reflection of glowing trees Witness nocturnal pollination from blinking bumblebees Everything in the night illuminates to be seen Even our sandy footprints show a glow from where we’ve been Every living creature has an aura of radiant light Showing it’s glowing love in this world of only night Would you come a little bit closer and sit right next to me Let’s cast out from this land of love and sail out to sea Follow fluorescent dolphins through an ocean mist of light Gliding with a song they sing out every night Singing all their love to this world of night and glow A song that draws your heart when you hear it you have to go Every note of love is pleasing to the ears Such a wonderful lovely sound it brings out joyful tears Your heart is filled with love from the songs the dolphins sing Encouraging your own felt love so you decide to present the ring Darling you know I love you as we float on love and sea I’ve taken you a million miles my love will you marry me |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
what a lovely fantasy ride and what a surprising ending is this a poem you're using soon??? |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
insect...so sweet...sounds like a great world...helen |
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Eye Junior Member
since 2001-06-10
Posts 28Outside Looking In |
a very pleasant picture painted. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful, vivid imagery. Nicely done. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
great imagery and especially loved the "Purple Sand" nice picture  Maree |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved the images, great work. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was enchanting Insect! I found myself smiling throughout, picturing three moons and blinking bumblebees ... wonderfully descriptive tale, and such a surprise ending! I really enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is one of the most fabulous proposals I have ever read! Write on! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
YES!!!!!!! oh YES!!!! uhhhh......I mean.....  .......wow! I love this......fantastic fantasy, with such a romantic ending....*sigh*.....Lois likes  |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Insect, what a wonderful place this is, a place where "everything in the night illuminates to be seen even our sandy footprints show a glow from where we've been every living creature has an aura of radiant light showing it's glowing love in this world of only night" Very Nice Insect. [This message has been edited by Amature2 (edited 06-18-2001).] |
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