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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-06-16 08:37 AM


Following thoughts [for Marge]

a poet’s penning
of my pedantic
nature

targeted my backside
quite well

so my thoughts followed
haphazard

searching

landing on my
name

and for a joke, picked
up circa 1951 Webster
year of birth
looking for something
similar

to me

finding

the Republic of Karelia

jumping ahead
fifty years

and finding petroglifs

where did she come up
with my name and
had she known
of this
location?

did she have a
dyslexic moment
and put the “i” before
“e” even if there wasn’t
going to be a
“C”

most folk have a name
that “means”
something

if I stretch my
imagination,
mine then possibly
means

“Finnish Republic”

good laugh, Mom

computers, however,
have a way of putting the
stamp on something

unique

and research shows
that there are  
Karelian Petroglifs

left, stamped long before you
or I
were even a
product sampling of
DNA combined

here long after you
or I
are no more.

I wonder.  Whose words
will then come back to
be recalled?

I need to find
a rock.

see the links below to find some unusal photos from the Republic of Karelia.

~*~

http://heninen.onego.ru/petroglif/english.htm  
http://www.gov.karelia.ru/gov/Leader/Document/day_e.html  

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 06-16-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-06-16 08:57 AM


haaaaaa..you are so very creative..I never know what to expect next from you or Marge

~Smilimg
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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2 posted 2001-06-16 10:10 AM


Clapping! Sunshine, you always brighten my day! Loved this!

*smiles*

~Tier

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3 posted 2001-06-16 11:50 AM


Karilea~
YOU are wonderfully unique ..
I find freedom's beauty in the golden meadow of your name.

Thanks for digging, sweet poet.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2001-06-16 12:00 PM


Had to come back in ...
Oh .... the beauty of it all ~



You ARE a rock !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-06-16 07:43 PM


Karilea,

You have such a unique and pretty name.  

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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6 posted 2001-06-18 09:39 AM


Thanks for the kick, twice, Marge!

Wynter, Tier, Auguste....thank you all, too!

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