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JLR
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0 posted 2001-06-16 05:46 PM


OCD


I have this odd attraction to numbers
picturing them in my mind
the even ones my favorites
sometimes adding them
better enjoyed…multiply by two
(they’re all even then)
counting, counting…numbers
are what I see
whether letters in words
tiles on ceiling
cats lying on me
two black, two yellow
everything in even numbers
it’s an odd obsession
but one I enjoy
this attraction to numbers


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Logan
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1 posted 2001-06-16 05:55 PM


Numbers are lovely to run through the mind, and see the adding tape collect them all up, being surprised what you have received as a total at the end of the day..enjoyed...gentle smile
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2 posted 2001-06-16 09:48 PM


Numbers add up to math, which was my worst subject in school! Interesting view though! Enjoyed this.  
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3 posted 2001-06-16 10:06 PM


Well at least it is not straigtening fringes on carpets!  I drive myself crazy...boy could I relate to this one, and I enjoyed it too.

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Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2001-06-16 10:58 PM


Numbers are awesome to play with aren't they?  Almost as much fun as words!  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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5 posted 2001-06-16 11:04 PM


JLR~
Fascinating and entertaining ... for YOU !
I'm with PoetdeVine on this one ...
When the good Lord handed out mathmatical interest ...
I was in the library !
Whew !  Glad He let me have my fill there.

I really enjoyed your perspective here.
~*Marge*~

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walker
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6 posted 2001-06-17 11:59 AM


Numbers are not as attracted as letters to me. Math was never my favorite. Good that you recognize it and enjoy it. Enjoyed this one.
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7 posted 2001-06-17 12:07 PM


LOL...I'm enjoying watching the "numbers" you rack up, reading and writing!
Mabel A. Dilley
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8 posted 2001-06-17 09:35 PM


When they said numbers, my mind mumbled something about chocolate chips cookies and milk, and there went my passion for mathematics. Excellent poem.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Zinsser
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9 posted 2001-06-18 02:12 PM


I know all about OCD  : )
Good write
  Thanks
  Connie

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10 posted 2001-06-18 02:15 PM


Nicely done... captures many things...and tell it all may be livable at the same time it can be crippling
FiGHT_aGaiNST_FoRM
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11 posted 2001-06-19 01:47 AM


Numbers, numbers, numbers, How well, I know this curse.  In youth, counting number of letters in words, sentences.  Alas, the simple number counting has moved away, been replaced with thoughts of death, being alone.  Nicely written, and true, too.

“I hate quotations, tell me something you know” –Ralph Waldo Emerson

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