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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Bound Every line, each caress, touched by flow, kissed finesse when you shield me passionately, I am bound in memory. You write your scenes, your times of pain. I verse my heart, sometimes mundane, but after all is said and done I'm bound to you, my "only" one. The walk you take along life's trail has seasoned you, a myst in veil of reigning thoughts, continued flow, I am bound and tied in glow Of once upons, of tales designed in rainbow hues, of endings lined with golden treasure, held in thought. I am bound, in memories caught. When dreams have passed and time takes all, when journey's night fades into fall, when freedom's bell rings loud and clear, I'll still be bound and waiting here. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 06-16-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Really liked this, great poem. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful poem of love and devotion. Great write.  All writing comes |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wynter, every line binds my heart...this is a beauty.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wynter, If this don't melt him down to butter, I don't know what will. Enjoyed |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Titia ...love your name thank you for visiting my words this morning *s Lone Wolf I am glad you thought so... Thank you for your kind words..I appreciate them ~Wynter Sunshine, Karilea..thank you..some mornings I am uplifted and on this one I thought it was my turn  Sy, Oh, I am not that good at melting but I do try ...thank you .. as always, ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely writing wynter as always..you are on a roll..  ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ This one goes well with my thinking ... 'When dreams have passed and time takes all, when journey's night fades into fall, when freedom's bell rings loud and clear, I'll still be bound and waiting here.' Me lika very mucha ! *Hugs*, sweet lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Nakd--This flows very gracefully. Wonderful writing. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Bound... apt title and a very enjoyable read.. always a pleasure to read.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Wynter...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Victoria, Marge, Poeminister, Cpat Hair,JamesMichael thank you all for your kind responses Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Of once upons, of tales designed in rainbow hues, of endings lined with golden treasure, held in thought. I am bound, in memories caught. When dreams have passed and time takes all, when journey's night fades into fall, when freedom's bell rings loud and clear, I'll still be bound and waiting here. ====================== this is so poetically lovely..in its cadence(which is perfect) and in its intend of emote. beautiful poetry wynter..with your usual graceful style. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Janet Marie thank you for such a beautiful response. *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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