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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-06-16 08:48 AM



Bound

Every line, each caress,
touched by flow, kissed finesse
when you shield me passionately,
I am bound in memory.

You write your scenes, your times of pain.
I verse my heart, sometimes mundane,
but after all is said and done
I'm bound to you, my "only" one.

The walk you take along life's trail
has seasoned you, a myst in veil
of reigning thoughts, continued flow,
I am bound and tied in glow

Of once upons, of tales designed
in rainbow hues, of endings lined
with golden treasure, held in thought.
I am bound, in memories caught.

When dreams have passed and time takes all,
when journey's night fades into fall,
when freedom's bell rings loud and clear,
I'll still be bound and waiting here.

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II




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Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-06-16 09:03 AM


Really liked this, great poem.

Titia

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Lone Wolf
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2 posted 2001-06-16 09:11 AM


Wonderful poem of love and devotion.  Great write.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2001-06-16 09:12 AM


Wynter, every line binds my heart...this is a beauty....
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2001-06-16 09:15 AM


Wynter,
If this don't melt him down to butter, I don't know what will. Enjoyed

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2001-06-16 09:24 AM


Titia ...love your name
thank you for  visiting my  words this morning *s

Lone Wolf
I am glad you thought so...
Thank you for your kind words..I appreciate them
~Wynter


Sunshine, Karilea..thank you..some mornings I am uplifted and on this one I thought it was my turn  



Sy,
Oh, I am not that good at melting
but I do try ...thank you ..

as always,

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Victoria
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6 posted 2001-06-16 09:50 AM


lovely writing wynter as always..you are on a roll..

                 ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-06-16 02:29 PM


Wynter~
This one goes well with my thinking ...

'When dreams have passed and time takes all,
when journey's night fades into fall,
when freedom's bell rings loud and clear,
I'll still be bound and waiting here.'


Me lika very mucha !
*Hugs*, sweet lady.
~*Marge*~

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Poeminister
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8 posted 2001-06-19 02:32 AM


Nakd--This flows very gracefully.  Wonderful writing.
Cpat Hair
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9 posted 2001-06-19 08:41 AM


Bound... apt title and a very enjoyable read.. always a pleasure to read..


JamesMichael
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10 posted 2001-06-19 08:58 AM


Very nice Wynter...James
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
11 posted 2001-06-20 08:39 AM


Victoria, Marge, Poeminister, Cpat Hair,JamesMichael

thank you all for your kind responses
Maureen

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Janet Marie
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12 posted 2001-06-20 02:06 PM


Of once upons, of tales designed
in rainbow hues, of endings lined
with golden treasure, held in thought.
I am bound, in memories caught.

When dreams have passed and time takes all,
when journey's night fades into fall,
when freedom's bell rings loud and clear,
I'll still be bound and waiting here.
======================
this is so poetically lovely..in its cadence(which is perfect) and in its intend of emote.
beautiful poetry wynter..with your usual graceful style.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
13 posted 2001-06-20 03:37 PM


Janet Marie
thank you for such a beautiful response.
*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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