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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2001-06-16 08:26 AM

Smile Me A Treasure

I’ve found a treasure in your smile.
A little pleasure for a while
It shows the girl within your eyes
That little curl your mouth applies.

It brings those sounds that pleasure makes
Brings little sighs that makes me quake
And warms my heart within its light
It even stays my dreams at night.

It turns my thoughts to rainbow hue
And chases shadows from my view
It makes me look upon the sky
And search for butterflies that fly.

It stokes the heat of my desire
Stirs the kettle with its fire
And brings to view that boy I knew
So long ago, so dim the view.

So if you can please smile again
They are the flowers of my glen.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-06-16 08:45 AM

I certainly hope she comes back to smile soon, if nothing more than to join us that are smiling here for having the opportunity to read this!

Thank you Sy!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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2 posted 2001-06-16 08:52 AM

It turns my thoughts to rainbow hue
And chases shadows from my view
It makes me look upon the sky
And search for butterflies that fly.

It stokes the heat of my desire
Stirs the kettle with its fire
And brings to view that boy I knew
So long ago, so dim the view.

So if you can please smile again
They are the flowers of my glen.
====================================

your poetry is the treasure...
and grants the beholder a smile in full measure.
and this one is a sigh from Sy...
and a smile on high .

(and its also a ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis)
*winkiewinkie*
Love ya make me smile Stinky

me

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 06-16-2001).]

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-06-16 08:54 AM

I love how you rhyme and the softness of your thoughts..always a wondeful read, Sy

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2001-06-16 09:08 AM

Sunshine,
Is still shinning *L*

JM,
To my smiling butterfly, wikiewinkie Stinky

Nakd,
And I love the softness of your comments.

Kit McCallum

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5 posted 2001-06-16 12:05 PM

Not only is this poetically perfect in rhyme and meter Seymour, but the sentiments are simply delightful. A wonderful poem that will leave each reader smiling for the beauty you've captured here.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2001-06-16 12:08 PM

Kit,
You say the nicest things, again I thank you twice.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-06-16 12:11 PM

Seymour~

Tweak of smile
your intent
Know it brought
much merriment
Upon this face
a smiling grace
Within your rhyme
this smile is mine !

Love n' hugs
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

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8 posted 2001-06-16 03:21 PM

*winkiewinkie*

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2001-06-16 04:28 PM

Marge,
I thank you for the hugs and smile. *L*

JM,
Now thats what I call a butterfly. Love ya Sy

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2001-06-16 09:46 PM

Sir Sy, I'm smiling right now at the beauty and exuberance of your tribute to her

Excellent flow, phrasing, rhyme and imagery~

Take care,
Melissa~

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