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FireDancer123
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since 2001-06-14
Posts 43
Virginia

0 posted 2001-06-15 10:51 PM



Yes I loved you.
(Wondering why)
Yes you used me.
(Why did I?)
Yes I hate you.
(Guess we blew it)
But yes I miss you.
(How ironic)

"If you've never stared off into the distance, then your life is a shame." - Adam Duritz
"Nothing is either good or bad, but thinking makes it so." -

© Copyright 2001 Kelly - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 2001-06-15 11:08 PM


well written and very true o yuh
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
2 posted 2001-06-16 02:24 AM


life is a bit ironic..isnt it...

good little write  

hugs, g

the boy said, my name's johnny
and it might be a sin
but i'll take your bet
you're gonna regret
i'm the best there's ever been!
-cdaniels

JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-06-16 04:38 PM


Kind of felt like a roller coaster...message well received!
MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
4 posted 2001-06-16 09:31 PM



Life is full of contradiction......
We are surely full of contradictions.....

I liked it alot......short and beating

Thank you......
*****************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2001-06-16 11:05 PM


Not ironic, but a contradition of sorts for sure.  Just shows you are human.  Someday, you can add this....
got over you today
(isn't that just the way)

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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