Open Poetry #14 |
No central heating in my childhood home |
Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
My childhood home My old home was a marvellous place where fantasies grew on a daily base Old it was, some threehundred years And when I left I shedded some tears The hall was deep and two arms wide With very large rooms on either side The ceilings were some two man high sculpture around that made you sigh Not a bathroom and no water running Yes at first that was quite stunning The kitchen was an enormous room Special closets for bacon and broom Floors covered with blackwhite tiles As I remember we slided some miles Originally two houses made one home Quite enough space for us to roam Two cellars vaulted arches of stones We always searched for hidden bones Two attics with balks as big as trees And so much dust we had to sneeze At last we got some modern comfort Just a shower we did need no more woodstoves kept us warm and glowing As Autumnstorms outside were blowing The central heat well we never got that So with sharp frost I frooze in my bed My father said the house doesn't like it At that he was right I have to admit In the big appletree I usually eat lunch Lots of flowers for each day a bunch A big church at the back of the yard My mother said God's closeby to guard A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. [URL=http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100 ]htt [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 06-15-2001).] |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Thanks for the glimpse...most inviting. Well, but for the lack of plumbing! Enjoyed very much. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Titia, this is a wonderful look at your childhood home. Thank you for the beautiful pictures of word and photo. ME |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful, made me think of the house I grew up in. I had my snacks(mangos) up in a mango tree. Surrounded by a huge rose garden.Thank you for this. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed...no air con in my childhood house either..ha...nicely written.. ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Very nice written ..i enjoyed it a lot |
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