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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2001-06-11 03:58 PM

I remember the fragrance of our romance
the velvety, softness of your kiss
the way you smiled, the way you laughed
a photograph of your love still exists
I remember trembling of your lips
I wandered from star to star in your eyes
deeply in heavens of your soul
kissing each star reflecting love
I remember how I wandered in your eyes
my heart sang a song of happiness
it sang in harmony with yours
each word, a song of contentment
our love was sweet as peppermint
the whisper of your voice,still sings a song

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 06-11-2001).]

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2001-06-11 04:00 PM

oh these sweet memories of the heart...enjoyed this lovely treat.

Charisma

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-06-11 04:04 PM

HI Vic, I remember, too, and it hurts but yet it stays a beautiful memory.
Nicely done.
Sandra

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-06-11 04:23 PM

sweet memories indeed... nicely said..

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-06-11 04:41 PM

Wonderful memories, indeed.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-06-11 06:19 PM

now this, indeed, is a memory. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-06-11 08:00 PM

"peppermint" what a nice way to describe it!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

7 posted 2001-06-11 08:03 PM

a good metaphor

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

8 posted 2001-06-11 09:09 PM

"I wandered from star to star in your eyes"

Lovely writing.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2001-06-16 12:19 PM

Thank you guys and gals..

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

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