Open Poetry #14 |
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I Give This Ring |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now ![]() |
“I GIVE THIS RING” by Bill Charles ~~~~ This ring I present to you, with these words, as I slip it onto your finger, the one closest to your heart… I ask you to always wear it, and know it’s there, for I do this with my devotion, praying never to part… Many years of sadness have I lived, not knowing why, tears would come down like the rain, and I felt, as if I would drown… Loneliness followed me, and I knew this unseen pain, lived in darkness, never knowing a smile, my heart would always, shutdown… But that day did come, one that was in my dreams, I found someone, and it was you, with a caring that only one, could possess… You never question yourself, giving to me unconditional, everything that you are, being and soul, and never, anything less… These are only a few, of the reasons I give this ring, but I would say just a few more words, which are true… I have never felt this way before, the way I do now, for in my heart, there’s only you… ~~~~ |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
How wonderful!! This is such a happy poem and I wish you years of happiness!! Hugs, ME |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Good luck to you Bill, you deserve it. Great poem of true love. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Bill my friend, I couldn't have said it better myself. . . wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, this is just so heartfelt and lovely! ![]() Take care, Melissa~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely pledge of love, Bill. Best of luck to you!! ![]() All writing comes |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this iss uch a beautiful pledge of love, sweet friend, I too wish you happiness forever and ever and this ring will forever be placed on both your fingers in loves unison! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, maybe someday I won't be so lonely too and I can have someone love me this way! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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