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Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

0 posted 2001-06-15 07:56 PM

What a Father Brings

He brings solidarity,
sanctuary in his bearing,
and though he tries to hide it,
he’s passionately caring.

Unwavering strength,
a sense of tranquility,
a different role for each of us,
a complete circle of family.

To a daughter, he is a paradigm -
what a gentleman should be,
enduringly solid,
but with flexibility.

To a son, he is an ideal,
teacher, coach and friend,
he understands the demands
of growing from boy to man.

To a wife, he is a counterpart
in creating harmony,
a partner in all aspects;
a lover, with security.

A father brings the gift
of giving of self,
and this is the essence
of love itself.

Corinne

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-06-15 08:01 PM

Corinne~
Tenderly portrayed ...
All those things ..... and more.
I like it !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-06-15 11:10 PM

gentle smile, Cor, hon, very wonderfully said, and very tender to the soul

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2001-06-15 11:11 PM

if he is a good one of course... yuh ... I had a step one of those that I will agree with on this poem... well done superb

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

4 posted 2001-06-16 12:17 PM

Great Job...Corinne

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-06-16 10:48 AM

well spoken Corinne. . . I really like the picture that you showed here, it's got a great flow to it. . .

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brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

6 posted 2001-06-16 04:25 PM

A beautiful tribute and a wonderful father's day gift.

"Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2001-06-16 04:31 PM

Corinne,
Well done wonderfully said. Enjoyed.

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