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Go Away |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
There was only one thought In his head as he flashed A determined smile A lifetime of hurt He would make it all Go away When he grew old and Had to give up The things that made him Feel alive He was already dead But the ringing in his ears And the pain in his soul Would never, ever Go away He couldn’t find a reason For continuing on Like this or Living to die one day Doesn’t make a difference Doesn’t make any sense at all Maybe he’ll find something To believe in That will make this All worthwhile, somehow And make it all, Go away |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Memories can be good and bad, I know how this person feels. Kathleen Blake |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Perhaps...it is the mother instinct in me, that makes me want to make all of this hurt go away... or perhaps it is because I have what is referred to as tinnitus, and know what pain the ringing in one's ear causes.... but how you make me feel this.... extraordinary.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
some days I wish for all feelings to "just go away".. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
really sad and painful....but yes, Ican relate to some degree.....great writing as usual  |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Sad, but so real So well written, thank you Titia |
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