Open Poetry #14 |
Iambe 2 ( I still Don't Dance) |
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I still don’t dance. If it was just a matter Of moving left and right Or circling in some Ritualistic pattern, I might be able to learn. Iambe tried to teach me. Pulling out old tapes, She played music she said Was easy to dance to, Put her arms around me, And tried to lead me through The music and into dance. I lack the rhythm to dance. I mastered the movements But could not in grace perform Anything but stick stiff And ugly undulations. Disgusted, Iambe told me I had no soul, Shut off the music ,pulled Coveralls over her black lace And went out to work On Bob’s old Ford. I watched her leave, Turned the music on again, letting it permeate the words Dancing in my head. I still don’t dance, but the words do. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
These are wonderful, and I would appreciate peering in to a little more of these, please.... |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
I don't dance myself but your words sure had a nice beat!Enjoyed it! |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Cpat, I don't dance either..can't even snap my fingers and tap my foot at the same time!! I like "your" lambe's style. Great pictures for the mind. ME |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well I DO dance...and love for my partner to do so, but he doesn't have to do anything but touch and sway and that will be enough to satisfy ...*and your words do dance one's mind ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Dancing is nice but the thrust of your work makes that of little importance. Well writ. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
still so bery good!!! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I still don’t dance, but the words do. Who cares if your mind won't get your feet to dance, as long it is getting your pen to move. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Yes they do, Ron. Yes they do. |
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