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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2001-06-15 04:42 AM


Shores of the Heart

Adrift, for many days and nights
Searching for life's lantern
Cold and harmed, torn apart
A thin ray of hope has come
The tears still flow and will return
Amidst the dreams and frights
Until the heart feels real comfort
It is near, and yet so far
The shores await the day
That happiness fronts the bay
Then the waves of the heart will ease
As the winds of time confront
The terrible pain of years gone by


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2001 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-15 07:40 AM


nicely written... enjoyed the read
Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-06-15 07:46 AM


Yes, I know the feeling and you have relayed it so well.

"This rose has seen red, I have been blue
I'm going to Ireland in 2002!" Kathleen.

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with you
3 posted 2001-06-15 10:30 AM


DJD~   I liked this very much

"It is near, and yet so far
The shores await the day"

this is beautiful  

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4 posted 2001-06-15 11:05 AM


Very well done!Enjoyed it!
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