Open Poetry #14 |
Dreaming |
whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
I woke up this morning From a wonderful dream I was in the best place I have ever been There was nothing that I couldn't Imagine or couldn't see I remember you were there We were so far from home There were big white doves Flying in the sky There were trees of great size Towering over head I stood amazed at the surroundings You had stars in your eyes You know where you are Pointing to a moth By a naked flame You show me the way Following you We walk Into a place of daylight Fields full of flowers There are dogs chasing butterflies Running along the river We slip through the grass Everything is so pretty Over the hill I can see a beach Then we are there on the sand Into the sea we run Then awake I jump Opening my eyes I close them wanting to return Nothing happens A feeling of happiness Washes over me as I Remember my dream [This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 06-14-2001).] |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
there's just something about dreaming, that seems so real, great poem |
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Sharon Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 53Within a whisper |
Lovely dream...I seldom remember mine though. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the only thing that's better than dreaming is remembering what you've dreamt. . . like this one. . . wonderful pictures. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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