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whiskey
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0 posted 2001-06-14 11:31 PM



I woke up this morning
From a wonderful dream
I was in the best place
I have ever been
There was nothing that I couldn't
Imagine or couldn't see
I remember you were there
We were so far from home
There were big white doves
Flying in the sky
There were trees of great size
Towering over head
I stood amazed at the surroundings
You had stars in your eyes
You know  where you are
Pointing to a moth
By a naked flame
You show me the way
Following you
We walk
Into a place of daylight
Fields full of  flowers
There are dogs chasing butterflies
Running along the river
We slip through the grass
Everything is so pretty
Over the hill
I can see a beach
Then we are there on the sand
Into the sea we run
Then awake I jump
Opening my eyes
I close them wanting to return
Nothing happens
A feeling of happiness
Washes over me as I
Remember  my dream

[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 06-14-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Rosebud1229
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1 posted 2001-06-14 11:32 PM


there's just something about dreaming, that seems so real, great poem
Sharon
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2 posted 2001-06-15 11:52 PM


Lovely dream...I seldom remember mine though.
Sven
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3 posted 2001-06-16 10:51 AM


the only thing that's better than dreaming is remembering what you've dreamt. . .

like this one. . . wonderful pictures. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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