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Trespassing On My Heart - Thanks, Marsha
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Trespassing On My Heart - Thanks, Marsha |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Trespassing On My Heart ~*Marge Tindal*~ Here you come again trespassing on my heart Ignoring signs of posted notice since you did depart Get on outta here, old love I don't want you around By trespassing on my heart you're walking on broken ground *Thank you for the inspiration, sweet Marsha* ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is lovely Marge, I really enjoyed it. The flow in this was wonderful. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What an inspiration, indeed! Perfectly, simply and bittersweetly expressed, Margie-girl! I relate very much, yet, also find a sense of peace in your words  Take care, Melissa~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Sounds to me like healed ground..gentle smile, geez, Marge, you flow like a summer breeze |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I just love watching your spinoffs and this was a doozie. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
isnt she just the best inspiration? This is great Lady Marge.... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, YOU take a thought and spin it into magic. Thank you for this Margie girl you have spun gold here for sure, absolutely excellent dearest heart sister. I love this I really do as soft as a whisper and utterly fabulous. And you never trespass on my heart Margie you belong there. Take care love and warm stuff Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ Thanks so much. It took a flying leap to the page. Melissa~ Glad to see you, sweetie. Shucks, gotta give Marsha credit for 'musing' me ! Logan~ OR well-heeled ground ! Tee-Hee ! Thank you. Mysteria~ Spinning is for dizzy blondes .... OH ! That's me ! LOL ! Thanks, love. Paula~ She is the bestest at bunches of stuff ... Thanks, Paula. Marsha~ You doll you ! *Hugging* you for being such an inspiration. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
smiling at the BOTH of you.... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Now thats putting it bluntly! Great flow and certainly to the point. You got that way of expressing it girlie! Hugs, Deb |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes.... |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Loved the ending!Nice job! |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
SUPER MARGE LOVED THE MESSAGE so what if on bended knee i beg.... lovya |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Yea ! Glad we got a smile ! She's my inspirational little buddy ! BloomingRose~ Yeppers ! Just a little 'go-with-the-flow' here ! SEA~ *smiling* softly, gal. SodPossom~ Thank you. Welcome to Passions. SoaringEagle~ Oh, sweet ~Warrior~ ... you'd NEVER have to beg !! Besides ... you've got homesteading rights ! ! LOVE YOU~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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