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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Soft petals of moonlight drifting through night blacken limbs, shimmering light, fading to shadows, where it did begin. Memories drift on soft breaths of wind sighing against my face, wishing time would recede and all would be in place. To return for only this night if only once more it could, again to be together in this small enchanted wood You held my hand so tenderly with delicate fingertips, smiling so sweetly before the kiss from honeyed lips. We knew it would last forever and yea, even a day more, way too young to realize what the fates could have in store. Your mistakes, my mistakes, maybe nobodies was at blame, everything drifted, muddled, and nothing was the same. I looked the small grove over, muted in shades of black and grays, the anniversary of when we pledged to love, through all our very days. I knew where we walked hand in hand, then holding in close embrace, the glow of the moon, radiating against her youthful face. With a sigh, from within, I turned to walk away, nothing left to see, only to find her standing there, with open arms for me. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Memories drift on soft breaths of wind sighing against my face, wishing time would recede and all would be in place." I just love this part......so so soft.....sigh  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ Like ... you left NOTHING out of this piece ! The glow of moon, soft gentle breeze, a melted kiss, the sway of trees. *Sighs* of sweet realize when she returned to thee. Can you tell that I like it ? I do ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Logan, this was an incredible write. I enjoyed this very much. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I read this aloud.... and then....I cried.... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
First love is sure something that stays with you. What a beautiful poem. Sandra |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
SEA, I am so glad that you enjoyed that part, I liked the feeling of it myself..thank you for being here...gentle smile Ahh, Marge, gentle smile, thank you, and I am happy that you did enjoy it Gentle Spirit, your words are too kind, but am glad that you enjoyed it..gentle smile Oh, Sunshine, careful or you will make me tear up too. You are so kind and I appreciate you being here...gentle smile Sandra, gentle smile, your words are always so thoughtful, thank you very much...gentle smile |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
everything drifted .... and nothing was the same. How I know that feeling, Logan. You write with such sensitivity. Thank you ~Wynter * and with that I shall say goodnight....*s "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
This was so well done, and a keeper in my books, I printed it for my little folder, and will read it again, and again, thanks Logan. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Logan...what a wonderful feeling...to find what you have longed for... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very well done.... I enjoyed the read and the images... nice work! |
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