Open Poetry #14 |
To Enchant my Melody |
MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~~~To Enchant my Melody~~~ Today I stood on that shore That far Fantastical shore Where they say Life starts to twinkle ~~~ Where all drops of dews Gather To wash this world With the new dawn To give it a glittering Soft existence Even if it didn’t last long ~~~ Where all words Stand Fighting to make The perfect utterance That could embrace All this contradiction All this magnitude Of love and hate Of longing Wanting Yet fighting All of life ~~~ Yes…… I stood there Silently Though all voices Seemed to rage inside of me All utterances Seem to fight to get a way To catch To draw This magical image ~~~ And with every dancing tide Every lofty performance Of that enchanting shore Every silencing echo Of voices Of sounds And of music Yes…..music Music of voices Mingling As if in a soft embrace Tickling all the senses As they dance in harmony To form this background Of breathtaking colors And voices ~~~ Shhhhhhh…… But where was my voice Lost Gained Or just left me …….. Alone To join that miraculous Music ~~~ The soft titling Breeze Took every single breath I had at that moment Took them away Telling me that is its way To hush all sounds in me To delicately kiss The bewildered Bewitched And forever enchanted Melody In me…. ~~~ And so Silenced Breath taken And forever Enchanted I stood there Waiting For the dawn To come Again To enchant My melody ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thank you It's only me.......only me |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Quite lovely! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this flows just like the picture that you have shown with it. . . it's a remarkable piece of work, well written and wonderfully delicate. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a magical way with words you have! I truly enjoyed this, what a beautiful moment you paint! Into my library this goes! Take care, Melissa~ |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
WOW!! This is great write. Thanks for sharing one of your enchanting moments. Melton |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
a lovely picture painted here and to all that read it should bring cheer |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Dear Sunshine....... How could I thank you for always encouraging me.......... Thank you dearest ********************* Sven...... That you have liked this one, truly delights my heart........... Thank you dearly ******************** Melissa I'm really glad that you loved it......and even more glad that it would be in your library..... Thank you......and take care you too ********************* Sir, Melton........... I must thank you for sharing me my enchanting moment ********************** Cpat hair....... Thank you dearly...... ****************************** It's only me.......only me |
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