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Open Poetry #14

the fog rolls in

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

0 posted 2001-06-14 11:37 AM

into my concrete
boots and gloves daily
I slip and heavy as
they are it seems
I would be more sturdy
each new day
than the last but
instead weaker I grow
and to the darkness
I cling as lower
and lower I sink
my eyes journey the fog
orbiting a path
unknown and unchosen
but death takes me
not for unfortunate
am I-
to my head
my body is not
connected

[This message has been edited by jellybeans (edited 06-14-2001).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-06-14 12:27 PM

but death takes me
not for unfortunate
am I-
to my head
my body is not
connected
loved these lines...

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-06-14 12:30 PM

strong melancholy

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

3 posted 2001-06-14 03:13 PM

thanks both of you

and yep melancholy days bring melancholy poems.....sigh

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