Open Poetry #14 |
To Rhyme Or Not To Rhyme |
Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
~*~ To Rhyme Or Not To Rhyme ~*~~* *~ Hugs to Kit and Balladeer ~* *~ ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 06-14-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is soooooo cute! I have no idea how to do that count......maybe you'll email me and tell me how you do that I enjoyed this very much ~SEA |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahhhh this is Wonderful, I absolutely enjoyed it 1212121234 hehehehe I'l lbe counting in my sleep lol Maree |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
I can't tell you how many times I've written a poem counting on my fingers as I tried to get the message down..tooo precious, Sharon! This is absolutely one I can relate to...and take it from a poet who used to write nothing but rhyme...poetry is the voice of the heart and soul...rhyme or no rhyme....the spirit rests within the voice of the muse!!!!!!!!!!!! Hugs and smiles...and much love to you, dawn (~A's...D~) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sea: Oh boy! Me either, well yes I know how to count but always have too much to say to make it fit in what Balladeer says it is supposed to so he gives me a "C and C-" LOL, best ask him. Dark Angel: I am glad you enjoyed this, was running late tonight so my muse said well let's be a little silly. Martha: Well you know I did too! Just did it wrong! Too funny, and thanks for coming by. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL ... now how'd you know this title would definately catch my eye. What a wonderful read from you Mysteria ... an "ode to the rhyme" so to speak, and very nicely written indeed! And I have to laugh, as not only do I get my fingers tapping, but my toes too! I've written quite a bit of free verse in my time and still do ... but somehow, something always draws me back to those finger-tappin', toe-tappin' rhymes ... I just love them so. ~As long as I have fingers and a foot to stomp the beat, ~I'll write the language of the rhyme - to me it's such a treat! Thank you so much for this wonderful gem this morning ... it's a treasure Sharon! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 06-14-2001).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Kit: Easy for you to say, but I think I can't keep a beat! He he, you make it look so darn easy, until I try it. Pssst...thanks for not getting out your red pen! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Laughing my fingertips off here ! An adorable 'salute' to the master ... NO ! You may NOT use one finger ! Great little jumpstart for the day. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Mysteria, I must admit your counts are off but then One must remember that you're counting in Canadian! Your syllables may stray a bit and accents may run wild But everything you write leaves one applauding like a child! Forget about the rules and don't let undue pressures mount.. No matter what you write, my dear girl, you will always count!!! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
To rhyme or not to rhyme.. that is the question whether it better in the heads of poets to pursue the rhyme so stoic or flow with words raging wild that are devoid of rhyme's sweet guile.... Nice poem...cute and though I rarely rhyme..one which pulls it off well is to be savored... |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
Mysteria,i really got a kick out of this little poem,it is so cute and smart too |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Marge AND Balladeer: I almost broke my finger tapping something out last night and finally said forget it! No matter what beat I use, yours or Michael's they don't work Arghhhhh! So, I will be cute and see if I can get away with it he he, thanks you guys! CP: We have two of the best here to learn from and still I can't rhyme, wonder if Mother Goose had that much trouble? You think? Thanks for dropping in. WS6: I ate my "smarties" this morning LOL, have a great day! ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You ALWAYS eat your "smarties"! May I offer you a big Cheerio!!! How's Trix? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hehhe tres cute |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Balladeer: Love Cheerios! Thank you. Way Out Walt: Love the icon, I took it for a week! Thanks for reading. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Mysteria , Very enjoyable , and the topic certainly struck a note with me . I have tried and failed miserably at poetry without rhyme or meter . I've read quite a bit but somehow most of it escapes me . There is however , one exception I have found to date which may strike a note with you . If you are not familiar with Marties' works you may want to check some out . Thanks for this . Doc |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Sharon, I so loved this one! "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Dr. Moose1: AM I familiar with Martie, you betca, she RULES! Thanks for reading Katleen: I am so glad you did, got away with it too, he he. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I loved this, Sharon. Very nicely done. Michael Proust- |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
I agree with you my dear A poem without rhymes not clear But I’ve found That you can play around With words that sound alike It doesn’t seem to strike The nerves that others might Why don’t we try a sigh? You know that just might get by It may not be too terse To use in our verse But overall you see I happen to agree But others seem to feel their verse Is best-expressed in reverse It has nothing to do with rhyme I read them all the time Their poems are beautiful to It just depends on your point of view LOL Mr»ÄlleÿÇät |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
wonderful!!! gonna post a piece for you which i wrote on this same subject a couple of years ago when the forums first started thanks MUCH for the read... i loved it! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I'm with you there Mysteria I think a poem should rhyme But don't you get hysteria This is the modern time When my eyes wandered over the beautiful words of rhyme I could not be mislead as I knew this was indeed Mysteria time Thanks to you rhyming poet. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. [URL=http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100 ]htt [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 06-15-2001).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Auguste: Thank you. Mr. Alley Cat: I am "the worst rhymer" there is, trust me but I try and the main thing is to have fun in my books! Thanks for reding Doreen Perry: Great! I just got home but going to look for it now, and thanks for reding Doreen. Titia: Hugs, you are such a sweetie, and thank you for the wonderful little poem. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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