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Mark Junior Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 18 |
Someday I thought to have time for love When a home built by two hands was completed When work brought forth the luxury a woman loved should be adorned in When power was reached in a cut-throat world to place her where she should be And now, I sit in my quiet home as elegant as every dream I own but just as lonely in my realization having waited too long for love |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is sadly sincere and a bittersweet beauty... Welcome to Poetry Land Mark... its nice to meet you... I look forward to more of your work. take care, jm she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mark, Welcome and well done. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Mark, may I echo all the JM has said and add, please, surely it is never too late for love, it feels that way for me, as well, but I'm hoping it can come and find with me a place to dwell. But, alas, I see the old saying, "the best laid plans of mice and men. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
And as we run the race we oft find the finish anticlimatic for the pace Enjoyed the read..and while I disagree that it is too late for anything.... the message was well delivered |
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Mark Junior Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 18 |
Thank you so much, all. Your comments are highly appriciated. Wonderful to find such a gold mine of writers. I shall enjoy my time here. |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Welcome Mark, very sincere poem from the heart, but I think in time you will find love and it will have been worth the wait, though it may seem like an eternity now. I wish you the best in your endeavors. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Mark this was lovely. Welcome to passions. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions, and I enjoyed your entrance very much.....well done. Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to Passions! I liked how you handled these thoughts very much! Sad but realistic! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
tender words...never too late *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Welcome to Passions, Mark...You write well of feelings..that's a good thing! |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Welcome...and it's never too late for love! |
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IWithinYou Junior Member
since 2001-06-14
Posts 21Within You |
While time indeed waits fr no oone, it also denys no opportunity. And it recognizes itself only as the present-seek to find. |
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