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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-06-13 07:05 AM

Eh, today,
This one is a milestone, so you say,
Which one,
Oh I forget, some number.
What is today?
Then it’s not this day,
But a yesterday,
Wait,
Perhaps it’s tomorrow.

Whose,
Oh it’s not mine,
Someone else’s milestone.
It is mine?
Which one?
Let me do the math,
Oh I passed that one years ago,
Several or was it more,
I stopped keeping track
Years ago.

What?
You celebrate all at once,
Why?
A month at a time,
Oh I don’t mind,
Yes, a busy month June is,
No, you go along,
I’ll just stay here,
That would be nice,
The cake will go with my wine,
Have a nice time.

Hello,
It’s you again,
Yes I’m still fine
I’m still here,
Oh that,
Well, put it over there,
I’ll get to it latter,
Perhaps.
Alright,
Yes drop by again
Later.
Thanks once more,
Close the door.
Good night.

Oh,
Not yet,
Still afternoon?
The next morning,
Still morning.
No,
You can take it.

I lost my place,
Oh any page will do
I’ve read it six times through.
Thanks for picking it up for me,
Could you pour me a little wine,
If you’ve the time,
What,
No wine?
Oh well,
Oh.

Gloom

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-06-13 07:14 AM

a pearl of a poem....of course I love birthday's...celebrations...moments to remember...times shared...and am not very good at resisting... words of yours *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-13 08:29 AM

(smiling) Love the humor and pthos woven into this... enjoyed the read!!

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2001-06-13 06:07 PM

I thought this was great!! Very cleverly done. Take care......Sue

Suetang

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

4 posted 2001-06-13 06:18 PM

This needs a big HUG and

and

and so on.

It was a joy to read it.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2001-06-13 06:24 PM

I agree with the others this is very cleverly done....A most enjoyable read!

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2001-06-13 10:23 PM

Thank you, Nakdthoughts,
I am pleased you liked my words,
But more like white marbles rather than pearls.

Thank you, Cpat Hair,
Glad you enjoyed the weave.

Thank you, Suetang,
Your words honor me.

Thank you, Titia,
Reading joy means I accomplished the writers goal.

Thank you, ethome,
I am pleased you also enjoyed.

Gloom

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