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Nathaniel Shain
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since 2001-06-03

Posts 35

0 posted 2001-06-12 05:06 PM

Lauren's Words

Soft and beautiful,
more like a sunset
than a dawn,
her words look back
and seek to draw us in.

Once captured,
we do not try
escape,
for we’ve found
home
and know these feelings
like our own.

~Nathaniel Shain~

© Copyright 2001 Nathaniel Shain - All Rights Reserved

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-06-12 05:17 PM

Soft and beautiful,
more like a sunset
than a dawn,
her words look back
and seek to draw us in.
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and know these feelings
like our own.
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yes...indeed she does...
you have captured the beauty of her words perfectly...
beautiful poetic tribute and gift.

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-06-12 05:30 PM

Lovely tribute to a sweet poetess... Nicely done.

Poeminister

Sunshine

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3 posted 2001-06-12 05:49 PM

Yes, she does just that....well done!

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4 posted 2001-06-12 08:26 PM

perfect. . . I know that she'll love this. . .

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elizabeth anne
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5 posted 2001-06-12 11:21 PM

Very nice tribute..nicely done...and deserved..

Elizabeth Anne

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Member Rara Avis

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6 posted 2001-06-12 11:35 PM

Nathaniel Shain~

I am greatly touched by this, I just can not say in words what this means....thank you from my heart...

Greeneyes~
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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

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7 posted 2001-06-13 01:31 PM

A truly beautiful gift to a truly beautiful Lady. Wonderful.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Nathaniel Shain
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since 2001-06-03

Posts 35

8 posted 2001-06-13 07:15 PM

Everyone, thank you for your very nice responses and Lauren, thank you for your dear friendship and lovely words.

Nathan

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