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Open Poetry #14

Only Pain

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-05-22 06:28 AM

I reach out to you longing,
In my pain,
To touch your warmth belonging.

I grasp for more than just air,
For my pain,
Soothing thoughts to show you care.

Only the pain screams being,
Only pain,
All emotions are fleeing.

Gloom

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2001-05-22 06:30 AM

short and sweet, nice rhyme scheme, sad theme...I like it

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2001-05-22 04:19 PM

Ouch! *S* I understand this all too well! *S* Great poem!

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

3 posted 2001-05-22 06:14 PM

Beautifully written.......Sue

Suetang

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-05-22 06:48 PM

very painful write

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

5 posted 2001-05-22 08:29 PM

Thank you, Passing Shadows
I am glad my sadly crafted words
Appealed to you and please you a bit.

Thank you, suthern
Understanding and memories aren’t always pain free,
Glad you liked the poem.

Thank you, Suetang,
Your words are very kind.

Thank you, Irish Rose,
Pain is one of the stronger emotions

Gloom

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