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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-06-12 02:19 PM

Written on Your Skin

I write my name
on your skin
in touch
printed there
in time
you embrace me
in glances
brush my hair
with your fingers
trace my smile
with your lips
I breathe
your breath
fly to your dreams
I whisper your name
you stir
pulling me
close in your mind
reciting me
with your thoughts
I am that tune
you can not get
out of your head
haunting you
my scent surrounds
wraps you in warmth
forever I am yours
for my name
is lovingly written
upon your skin

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-06-12 02:24 PM

This is lovely, Helen. So romantic and tender. Great write!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-12 02:27 PM

Branded so to speak...( grinning)

A very nice poem..good flow and images conveying the emotions and thoughts behind them...as usual I enjoyed reading

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

3 posted 2001-06-12 02:34 PM

Tattoo me,
With scents and sensitive sighs,
Write on skin,
And within,
Red lipstick on my pale skin,
And perfume
So to swoon,
Writing bold with emotions,
What to do,
Tattoo you,
Could I mark you like you mark,
Tattoo two.

Gloom

Just a friendly response
to your very inspirational poem

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-06-12 02:58 PM

Well done, again

g-hm
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 85

5 posted 2001-06-12 03:33 PM

This has got to be your best writing so far.The tenderness is felt all the way to
the end. Such a sweet thought of a lucky person.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-06-12 03:51 PM

Enjoyed reading your poem...James

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2001-06-12 03:55 PM

lovely,

may I hope it is also written on his heart

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-06-12 08:30 PM

what a tender passion. . .

wonderful helen. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2001-06-12 09:01 PM

Beautifully soft.......lovingly tender

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

10 posted 2001-06-12 10:06 PM

A wonderful, soft aura this piece has....such romance. Beautifully done!

*Krista Knutson*

"Touched the mirror, broke the surface of the water,
Saw my true self, all illusions shattered..." ~Tracy Chapman

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