Open Poetry #14 |
nothing. . . |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I watch you I see the way that you move the way that you walk and I stop and think to myself just how wonderful you really are and you turn to look at me, you smile and ask me what I'm thinking "nothing" I say as I smile and kiss you softly you smile and say "I love you too. . ." ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Sven, someone is sooooo very lucky to have you. You always know just what to say...and you say it sooo well. I loved this! Sauni Sauni :) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
how delightful it is when a loved one deciphers our hidden thoughts!! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very nicely painted... it is the simple things which others who are familiar with us just know... those things we share without words... enjoyed this a great deal |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and a sweet "nothing" it is too! Or is that sveet? Enjoyed. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
They always know, don't they? Can't fool 'em for a minit Excellent write my friend. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
tender piece within precious love.....excellent as always. Charisma |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
So sweet and lovely, Sven. It is great to see you this happy! Corinne |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Saunni, thank you. . . and I'm glad that you loved this. . . faterider, yes it is, then it's real. . . thank you my friend. . . Capt Hair, thank you. . . yes it is the simple things, and when you have those, everything else is easy. . . serenity, . . . it's a sweet or sveet as you want it to be. . . thank you. . . Interloper, they always do. . . even when we don't want them to!! Thank you. . . Charisma, thank you my friend. . . Corinne, thank you, but, I'm always this happy!! -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Gotta love the ones who can feel your minds eye on them! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
"something".... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like your loving spirit Sven...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I have had these feelings before, lovely arent they...when two are that close to read each others mind or face, or smile.....wonderful... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
BeAuTiFuL WriTinG SvEn |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sweet...very nice...i enjoyed this greatly...thanks for sharing it...bye sven... im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Some poems are pretty. This is one of those. Thanks, Sven Michael Proust- |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh this is really sweet Sven Maree |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a bond |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Thanks. You've really said "someting". I am lucky, cause I have one just like that. Melton |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
JLR, yes, you do. . . they're the ones that are keepers. . . thank you. . . Decaflame, "everything. . . " James, I know that it's a spirit that we share my friend. . . thank you. . . Lauren, I knew that you would understand, it's a wonderful feeling isn't it?? Thank you so much. . . WS6, ThAnK YoU. . . albert, thank you for reading my friend. . . Auguste, pretty is what I was going for with this one. . . thank you. . . DA, thank you my friend, glad that you enjoyed. . . ps, everyone can have this kind of bond. . . thank you. . . Melton, thank you. . .glad that you know as well. . . ----------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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