Open Poetry #14 |
Without Words (repost) |
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Three words in which to say What I feel for you But do you think I can say them? No, I can’t it’s true I can make the strong man Weep tears of joy or sorrow My words can tell a story of A yesterday or tomorrow My dictionary and thesaurus Hold the words within their covers Those words I’ve read countless times Written by so many others Do you think I can write them Here upon this page in black Or will they stay upon my lips Unsaid, so I can’t take them back If you knew how much I need To tell you how I feel If only I had those three words My love I could reveal. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Know the feeling *s.. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah those elusive words indeed.... nicely written and an enjoyable read! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is sad and sweet and I think you could tell anybody ANYTHING with grace! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Sharon. Very well expressed! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Maybe if you look closely you'll find those three words. I like! Michael Proust- |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
My dictionary and thesaurus Hold the words within their covers Those words I’ve read countless times Written by so many others ================ Oh......I loved this one. Truly an enjoyable read.......for a truly elusive words....... If you look deep down you will see the words which I can't say etched in my soul carried secretly in my eyes...... Thank you ************************ It's only me.......only me |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Did you write this just for me, Sharon?! Oh, how this describes my situation to a tee. Well expressed~ Take care, Melissa~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This one speaks volumes. I hope you find the courage to say those words one day. You just may be surprised. Nice write! All writing comes |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Three of the most needed words for us all are too often a fright to deliver. Once escaped from lips won't evaporate and are unretractable. Hope you can....someday. |
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