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Open Poetry #14

Unearthed

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-06-12 12:47 PM

Unearthed

dwell then in thoughts
explore

grip tender then some
evermore

lines are drawn, then
underscored

in truth? I love you
even more

fortunate, this time
has come

dwells our moon in
midnight’s sun

stighnoti, seguires
in rapture,
acquire

truth

inspired

Secret Whisper
Member

since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

1 posted 2001-06-12 12:54 PM

Loved it. What wonderful simplicity.

"We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912)

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

2 posted 2001-06-12 01:30 PM

beautiful words

"Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-06-12 01:49 PM

(clapping)

Wonderful... simple form and flow, but powerful delivery and words... you do amaze me...

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-06-12 03:26 PM

You write very well in this form. Nicely done.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-06-12 03:45 PM

Bonito!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-06-12 03:51 PM

I’d explore thy mind
Give myself to tender grasp
Imprisoned within
Climb on and I will follow
‘Til we reach the pinnacle

Nathaniel Shain
Junior Member

since 2001-06-03

Posts 35

7 posted 2001-06-12 05:02 PM

As always...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-06-12 08:28 PM

well done indeed. . .

a form that fits you dear Lady. . .

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