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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
You and me by now should be like an well oiled wheel beyond getting a feel for one another we should be like brothers an unbreakable bond making "us" above & beyond the opinions of the world my guy, your girl moving in harmony like earth & sea yet, much got in our way do we leave? or stay and make it as it's meant to be? A well oiled wheel, just you & me... ~Tier 6/01 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Always a pleasure to read your words my friend.... glad to see you drop in!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
moving in harmony like earth & sea =========== Wonderful write. How about "just you and me?" |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Captain, it's good to get a chance to stop in a read and comment a little! *smiles* Interloper! do you really mean it? Just you and me? *chuckling* (j/k) Thanks! I think the title fits perfectly! ~Tier |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Life, often seems to get in the way of what should be. I really liked this.  Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
This is a pleasure to read and so glad to see you again Tier...it's been a little while....treat us some more, would you please? |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I really liked what you wrote here! I think it's cool... Sauni Sauni :) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I have a feeling that you're getting there Tier. . . but, what about "Just you and I"?  great job my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
honest opinions?? i think "a well oiled wheel, just you and i" is very catchy...this somehow reminds me of a famous wheelbarrow poem |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This is lovely work. I like your style. All writing comes |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Tovi, thank you so much, I'm glad that you liked... *smiles* Decaflame, Now you've gone and made me feel special! thank you! *hugs* Sven, If it wasn't for the fact that I have one entitled, "you & I"... *chuckles* Thank you, dear friend, your comments are always a pleasure to read... faterider, thank you much! *smiles* I'm glad that you enjoyed reading! Saunni, thank you! so kind of you to say... Thank you,Lone wolf, I really appreciate that! ~Tier |
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