Open Poetry #14 |
For My Love |
Lonely Shadow Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128Virginia |
closing my eyes blinded by the radiance of this wonderful woman this angel who stands before me oh how I love her her gentle smile, her loving heart her beautiful presence feeling her passionate spirit surrounding me sending my heart soaring softly I begin to weep overjoyed of my happiness remembering feelings I had lost but now have found again she has mended my heart gently taking hold filling it wil love and joy giving me the strength the courage to face my fears to fight off my inner demons am I worthy of such a precious gift? I gaze into her eyes holding her close my voice soft as I whisper "I love you" slowly drawing in pressing my lips to hers kissing her so tenderly slowly breaking our kiss as I hear her gentle words "and I love you" with a gentle sigh I thank the lord above for bringing her into my life thanking god for her love that fills my heart for letting me fall in love with her for finding a reason to live again Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful romantic poem! You have a second chance and that's marvelous! |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Beautiful emotion and flow. A lucky woman, I would say. Love does bring much hope. Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful heartfelt write. love it. Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now, this is what we need around here. . . some more Romance. . . great job. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
That kind of inspiration to go on is the best kind, isn't it? Wonderful write, LS! sp I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why |
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zzz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 55 |
ah how romantic just beautiful may the love you share last forever |
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shadowsbabygirl New Member
since 2001-06-11
Posts 1 |
wonderful poem my love!!! and theyre right, i am a lucky girl!!!!! and im happy you are once again writin the happy stuff!!!!!!!! i love you sweetie pie! |
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