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VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-06-11 09:48 AM

First Kiss of Summer
Virginia Salter

razzle, dazzle, razzle berries
tease my tongue and dance my nares
picking one an’ picking two
should I save a few for you

in my tiny garden measure
is my little razzle treasure
seems it’s quite apparent, dear
someone beat me to my cheer

feathered miss or thieving gent
are likely where some berries went
as I spot ‘mong maple trees
‘tempting grow beneath my knees

find them all, a little bunch
rinse them now, too late for lunch
ooh there’s one so sweet and juicy
even those a little mooshy

if you were here, my darling friend
I’d share with you until the end
yet since you’re not, no need to worry
I’d not let them rot, no need to scurry

for there’ll be gone before you know it
my teeth will have the seeds to show it
so take it from me, friend of mine
there’s some more upon the vine

and should you perchance to by here tarry
bring a thimble for you to carry
a sampling of my little nest
of my razzleberry treasure chest

© June 13, 2000

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-06-11 09:54 AM

and should you perchance to by here tarry
bring a thimble for you to carry
a sampling of my little nest
of my razzleberry treasure chest
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oh yes....you knew a raspberry butterfly would LOVE this one!!
very cute and clever write Virginia...
and wonderful cadecene as well.!!
enjoyed this one much

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-06-11 09:56 AM

thank you, JM, so happy a raspberry butterfly flitted by to read and enjoy

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2001-06-11 04:25 PM

Oh! I just loved this ...wonderfully done.

love the rhythm..

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-06-11 04:29 PM

Oh Vas you know how to make me smile. this is a very nicely writtin poem. excellent done my friend,

((hugs))
Charisma

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

5 posted 2001-06-11 04:32 PM

That's what I mean see, a giggle poem.
Keep writing them please.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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