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Listening To The Rain |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~* Listening To The Rain *~Listen to the rainfall, Listen to the wind. Listen to the silence; I'm missing you again. Looking only at grey clouds, Where has my sunshine gone? Watching raindrops falling, Makes my day so long. Remembering your laughter, I see a rainbow form. Then out behind those gray clouds, Sneaks the sunshine bright and warm. Remembering your smile, The raindrops cease to fall. I can feel you close beside me, But you're not here at all. And I... Listen to the rainfall, Listen to the wind. Listen to the silence; I'm missing you again. ~*~For my friend Dawn in Texas - stay dry ~*~ art: Steven Hanks "Inside Looking Out" song: Secret Vow (for A and D) [This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 06-11-2001).] |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Sharon...you certainly have your timing down to the point that you know when to say something at just the perfect time I need to hear it. It has been an emotional roller coaster here, these storms are draining me...and I am feeling a little blue tonight, and missing someone very precious to me. Thank you for this beautiful song that surrounded my heart in warmth and peace... (and the music was just awesome) You are an angel on earth, and I love ya muches....(((((((HUGS))))))))))))) and Smiles to you, always, Dawn (~A's...D~) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and she loves it...and you give her sunshine..... cant think of a better reason for poetry.  |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
As always since I have been reading your work, I find myself so caught up in the words you say that it's almost like I'm there. I love your poems and look forward to them. Beautiful is written all over this one and everything you write. Sauni Sauni :) |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, the clouds seem to have a silver lining, gentle smile, well done, Mysteria, we have all had those rainy days it seems |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
This is STUNNING........You've captured it completely. The ending made me cry. I loved this. Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mysteria~ Awwwwwww ! This is soooooooo pretty. I am pleased to know it gave Dawn a much-needed smile ! Lovely, lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Dawn: You know I would give anything to be there in hipwaders don't yeah? And I wish I could build a bridge to stretch from Texas to "that place" but I can't so I will just say I love you girl, hang in there, and stay dry. Janet Marie: Neither can I to tell you the truth, neither can I, thank you. Saunni: See now you know me, no fair! He he, you can read between the lines now sweet one. Logan: I am a "rainy day specialist", ever have one - call me, and thank you for reading. Tovi: Oh thank you for your sweet words, I appreciate the time you spent reading this. Marge: Awww, I am pleased you are pleased!  |
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Nathaniel Shain Junior Member
since 2001-06-03
Posts 35 |
Mysteria, I liked this so much and know that Dawn will also. May God look after the people in Texas and Louisiana. Nathaniel |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Nathaniel: Thank you for your concern, where she is power is back on, but 14 wheelers were sliding down the interstate last night! Yikes! Again, thank you. |
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AJ MacNeil Junior Member
since 2001-05-02
Posts 40 |
Thankyou Sharon .. this is just so beautiful ... and it certainly does sum up the sentiments right now ... you have nailed the emotions perfectly ! ... Thankyou for being such a special friend to us, we'd be lost without you ! ... oh and by the way, I was thinking I may have to put some music to this poem .. what do you think ? *smiles* ... much love to you dear friend, Andy XO |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
you always amaze me with delight in everything you write  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lovely delightful poem....such a wonderful reminiscing mood! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done... nice imagery and flow to support the message... nicely painted. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So charming! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
"Listen to the rainfall, Listen to the wind. Listen to the silence; I'm missing you again." ------------------ Listen to the rainfall Listen to the wind Listen to the silence till the end and listen to my heart beats Lovely ..........and touching You have a lovely magical way of weaving a beautiful tapestry of words, music and pictures....... Thank you ********************** It's only me.......only me |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Andy: You send me something you sang, I will put it on here you bet! And it is I who am grateful for your friendship dear man, you are a treasure. I am so glad that the rest of you so enjoyed this one, it was just a little heart message sent for two people I love, and I hoped it would show them I cared. Thank you all for reading it. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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Martha Cowan Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 240Groves, Texas |
Sharon....it MOST certainly showed you cared...but you show us that in all of the wonderful things you do. I just had to stop back by and visit this again...it truly meant so much to me...thank you! Hugs and much love to you, always my sweet friend!!!!!! dawn |
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