Open Poetry #14 |
Experimentation |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
err...be truthful if ya have to! LOL! These are my poor attempts at some form, but remember I'm a beginner. The MANY years ago that I have done stuff like this really don't count anymore. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Friendship glimmering A precious stone awaiting Lucky fingers find ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Smile leaks from the heart Spreading joy on frowning lips Charmed from the inside [This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 06-10-2001).] |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
I think this is a beautiful write and the lines are great |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Temptress~ You did a wonderful job on both of these Senryu's. Go gal ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Gentle one, what more needs to be said, you have said it all in just a few words..Beginner? Bah, you are too good...gentle smile |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
good job with these. . . they get easier when you do them more. . . so, try to write a whole bunch. . . just remember, less is more. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You haven't lost your touch. They are so nice Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I am new to this form myself and appreciate being able to learn from others like yourself! Kathleen Blake |
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