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Open Poetry #14

My Muse's Purse (senryu)

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-05-21 01:31 AM

My Muse's verse-purse
Holds coins and a universe
And a sleepless curse

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 05-21-2001).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2001-05-21 04:22 AM

very deep

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-05-21 10:15 AM

Well done.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

3 posted 2001-05-21 10:30 AM

let loose tight verse-strings
let your muse dance, sing and bring
joy to all who read

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-05-21 10:32 AM

Good one. I do so wish to make one tiny observation, but you do not invite them, so...I shall not, as when I have done so with others, the repercussions have been daunting.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-05-21 11:47 AM

I like this very much

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2001-06-10 11:21 PM

i find this to be amusing....made me chuckle...

sleepless curse?? i agree

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

7 posted 2001-06-11 08:02 AM

ahh..rhyme divine snuck in with the clever impact...and use of metaphor.
well done poet sir.

she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me
like I'm a little untrusting when I think that the truth is gonna hurt ya
~MB20~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2001-06-11 08:41 AM

Poeminister,
Enjoyed the read.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-06-11 06:37 PM

now this took some doing . . .

great job my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-06-11 08:07 PM

This must be Senyru week! I had to think long and hard about this one, it really makes you want to read it over and over.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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