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Winds That Call
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Winds That Call |
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theLadypoet Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 97Or USA |
An untamed wind lifts up the skirts of trees, shaking them like wet-wash some old woman pins toward the sunlight. It shrieks like silly, adolescent girls. It bends sound away from the ear. Its breath is not nice, is laced with ice, unrelenting. This devil wind, it pushes all the clouds out of the sky so they can lie about the coming winter - mimicking the lamb of spring, concealing the bloody jaws of cold, drear, forever death. "A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Rooevelt |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoetLady~ 'An untamed wind lifts up the skirts of trees, shaking them like wet-wash some old woman pins toward the sunlight.' The imagery jumps off the screen ... WONDERFULLY REFRESHING ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
loved it..so descriptive *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
Oh Lady, This fills me with all kinds of feelings. Good work darlin. Thank you Mr»ÄlleÿÇät  |
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pres56 Junior Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 28 |
Nice poem it leaves you with so many images to think about. pres |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I agree, nice imagery and descriptions in this. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
amazing is all i can say |
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