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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Peacock Strut Double Tanka  Diva of dazzle struts wild with erotic winds enigma of dance awakening feathers sway beckoning worship from day  "Look at me!" quoth her "dare not resist my parade!" eye candy supreme all hail kaleidoscope queen synergy greater than sun *By Melissa Honeybee* [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 06-10-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yesssss I love these double tanka, ....beauty within. Charisma |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh this is absolutely FANtastic! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"kaleidoscope queen"--Love that. Wonderful tanka. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh this was great Melissa! I also appreciate the work that went into putting this together as well as your wonderful double tanka, bravo! ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great stuff Melissa! " all hail kaleidoscope queen synergy greater than sun." very interesting! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"Diva of dazzle". . . are you sure that you're not talking about yourself here Melissa???  Excellent work my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
 Thank you everyone! It was both fun and difficult to pen this, but, I am happy with the result~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Melis this is SOOO cool... and So darn pretty. and that song...too much fun... lovely inspire and presentation... and so great to see your name here again. well done poetess honeybee |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Melissa~ Dang - this is wonderful ! ! ! You've got the rhythm - you've got the rhyme ! LOVE IT ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Melissa, I LOVE the way you strut your tanka!!  |
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