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Oh, Can't You See?
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Oh, Can't You See? |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Please note that this was written last year. I've only had 3 cups of coffee this morning, uh, I think. Oh, Can’t You See! Virginia Salter I only had two and a half cups of coffee well, two and a half mugs of coffee well, guess that’d be five cups of coffee but I had them all fore nine a.m. then I had a cup of Pepsi well, it was a paper cup, you know the Dixie cup well, it was a forty-four ounce Dixie cup so, that’s um...five and a half cups of Pepsi at dinner, at Chen’s, I had some tea don’t look at me like that, you see, it was those tiny little cups that only hold a few, some drops and I only drank half the pot that’s all I had today no coffee after nine a.m. I don’t know why you think I am hopped up on caffeine like Sam, telling tales, Green Eggs and Ham or crying out in deprivation of sleep and rest and relaxation like certain respondents at the circle bouncing ‘round as young Steve Erkle caffeine doesn’t bother me at all it only helps my limbs stand tall from lack of sleep and where-with-all, I’d be unable to catch or toss a ball so give it a rest and pray for me I need some sleep, oh can’t you see! © June 10, 2000 |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is deligtful, Virginia!! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
WEll, Vas, I certainly can't see why you can't sleep, must me something you are eating, I would have a cup of coffee and ponder on that one if I were you. One spoon of sugar or two?...gentle smile |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
this was really delighted Vas, reminds me that I haven't had coffee since this morning....  loved it. Charisma |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
being a coffee non-addict, i feel inadequate to respond here...ha!! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) Pass me the coffee pot would you... I didn't sleep well last night and haven't yet today gone on my caffiene flight |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You drank all that and can't see? Imagine that! LOL. This was neat, Virginia! All writing comes |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Big grins Well done. Write on. |
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