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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Stage Two I’m building a world on the point of extreme A beautiful world on the edge of a dream With flowers and castles and flights of a dove A place that only encompasses love It will have green valleys and waterfalls Blue cathedrals and golden walls Gardens full of exotic things Everything that a mind can bring It will have the grace of a butterfly A palette of color an aura sky And a warmth only second to the sun With a charm that will never be done It will have but one entrance one goal Only through the doorway of my soul It will bar all else that would do it harm For those are its goals and soul of its charm. It will open to one and only to one When that is accomplished it will be done. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A lifetime achievement, accomplished by those who know their heart.... smiling, applauding....hoping.... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very beautiful Seymour ... a wonderful cadence and rhyme to this inspirational piece, much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit [Sorry Sy, I got so caught up in the moment ... no excuses, I've fixed it now and enjoyed a second read as well - see what your poetry does to me?] [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 06-10-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you sweet. *L* Kit, What's with the Sudhir? That is the second time it happened. But regardless I'm glad you liked it. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Such a lovely rhyme Such a lovely place I can see the smile of love upon your face 'A place that only encompasses love' That would be a dream palace for sure ! Love n' hugs~  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I’m building a world on the point of extreme A beautiful world on the edge of a dream With flowers and castles and flights of a dove A place that only encompasses love  It will have green valleys and waterfalls Blue cathedrals and golden walls Gardens full of exotic things Everything that a mind can bring  It will have the grace of a butterfly A palette of color an aura sky And a warmth only second to the sun With a charm that will never be done  It will have but one entrance one goal Only through the doorway of my soul It will bar all else that would do it harm For those are its goals and soul of its charm.  It will open to one and only to one When that is accomplished it will be done. ========================= A mystic doorway ... a garden of Eden in store A place of peace ... where butterflies soar I love walking barefoot ... on the beaches of your mind all there is wisdom ... wrapped in rhyme and kind. Stage two maps the goal ... to your beaches of understand Porthole to your soul ... heart in your hand. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ *winkiewinkie*  me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are like a butterfly to me. Read tomorows poem it will explain what I mean. *L* Sy JM, Your pictures to the poem are exquisite as is your comentary. You really brighten my day Love ya Sy |
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