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Dawn
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Dawn woke me from strange dreams of England and though she came hidden under layers of clouds I still felt that rush of hope of quiet awe that the still of her has always brought Where every dream I've ever owned awakens in the magic of her entrance and calls to me so that I might hear and see the gift of a brand new day the light of possibilities in the sparkling clean wash of morn Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh this is a very nice description of Dawn...loved the silence and magic within. Charisma |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I know the name well, it and the person who who owns can inspire beautiful poetry. loved this, reminded me of my Dawn. "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tovi, this is wonderful! |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Thank you so much, Charisma, Brian, and Sunshine. It is magical, isn't it?!  Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
yes, sometimes i think the greatest thing in life is to be able to enjoy the majesty of dawn every single day... related strongly...enjoyed... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Very Beautiful! Maree |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely..enjoyed very much ~Victoria~
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