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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-06-10 01:46 AM

Standing there by the pond
in cast of light of sun in pink,
I watched him barely listening.
I watched him--thirsty eyes in drink.

I loved the very lines of him.
The way his shirt cleaved to his chest.
I wanted so to capture that---
his strength became my restlessness.

And as if he heard me think,
he turned to me gesturing,
an offering of sweetest smile
distant instance reconciled.

This is the feed for my sweet dreams.
Just him there, calling to me.
Surprise of lovely beckoning.
Just him there. Calling to me.

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 06-10-2001).]

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2001-06-10 02:22 AM

Sigh...oh yes...thats all it takes isnt it? Just that little look...the gesture...mmmmmmmmmm

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-06-10 02:38 AM

Paula..check your e mail! icq flu over here!

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

3 posted 2001-06-10 02:49 AM

Sometimes thats all it takes to build dreams upon, in possibilities. Nicely done..

Poeminister

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-10-2001).]

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2001-06-10 04:10 AM

Nice dream Celeste! One of those kind you can fall into over and over! Good work!

angelbear
Member

since 2001-05-22

Posts 139
North East, USA

5 posted 2001-06-10 04:42 AM

ohhh baby..he sounds great..(lol) very descriptive, touching poem!

I can't control
my destiny
I trust my soul,
my only goal
is just to "be"
-Lyrics from RENT

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2001-06-10 08:19 AM

I loved the very lines of him.
The way his shirt cleaved to his chest.
I wanted so to capture that---
his strength became my restlessness.
===========================

gawwwwd I love yer restless rhymes ...
*smiling at you from here*

me

she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me
like I'm a little untrusting when I think that the truth is gonna hurt ya
~MB20~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-06-10 06:42 PM

you know what's better than hearing the call??

answering it. . .

great one here. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-06-10 07:07 PM

Yes, I have to agree, this is beautiful. And the one thing I would like to see, that is NOT going to happen.
Sigh.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2001-06-11 01:33 AM

I loved the very lines of him.
The way his shirt cleaved to his chest.
I wanted so to capture that---
his strength became my restlessness.

ahhhh girl, love your thoughts, glad you write them down
and so beautifully

Maree

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

10 posted 2001-06-11 04:09 AM

wonderfully done, my friend...

Regards O Serene One,
Sudhir

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

11 posted 2001-06-11 07:59 AM

nicely captures the possibilities we often over look..if we too are not watching...

enjoyed

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2001-06-11 08:47 AM

Serenity,
A dream well captured, a poem well written.

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