Open Poetry #14 |
Love on the Internet (repost) |
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
My heart soars without hearing your voice I try holding back, but have no choice You won my soul with a passion's flame Because of you, I'll never be the same I smile as you approve my verse Deeper I sink into Cupid’s curse And though you think my words a game I continue to write them just the same. Gently chiding you beckon me ICQ messages set words free Fingers that dare to say the word The only one you've not yet heard Silence speaks a world of feeling Cursor blinks as my head is reeling Thoughts and words I’ll not repent This is love on the Internet |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DeVine One, The write is excellent for that there can be no repent. Sy |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Silence speaks a world of feeling Cursor blinks as my head is reeling Thoughts and words I’ll not repent This is love on the Internet OH my, you have captured this strange feeling perfectly. "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, and as a recent post was entitled "it sucks!!! Oh wait, not the poem "love on the internet" but LOVE on the internet !!!! [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 06-09-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I like it!! Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Definitely a powerful thing. Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Yep, there is! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you said it all....captured the feelings pretty good. Charisma |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
If we all be truthful, we know the power of words on the internet. very well said, Poet...gentle smile |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Sometimes, I swear that blinking cursor is screaming as I try to collect my thoughts before responding. Have to agree with brian...captured perfectly. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
lol!! i LOVE it! missed it first go 'round ain't love grand anywhere you find it?... taptaptap... there's PEOPLE in there! as our sweet sereneOne always says... and as some very unknown poet once said, "love is love is love is love is love so love me baby!" oh whoops... that would be me, wouldn't it? |
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