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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
On rippled water Sunlight in a clear brilliance Shatters to diamonds (thanks for the haiku idea, Mysteria) S Arthur |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Blinded by the brilliance of the light! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Early glamour light golden threads catched morning dew peaceable image |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
I wish so much I was more talented at writing these. This is excellent. I loved it. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Might I add to the Collection? On rippled water Sunlight in a clear brilliance Shatters to diamonds Early glamour light golden threads catching morning dew peaceable image Sunshine overhead Smooth stones showing underneath Ripples in dew drips Gloom |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Early morning glow imply shattered diamond's bliss awaken nature off course you may add....as I can't resist the dew drips inhere... Charisma |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
~*~ sunshine dances light on dewdrops of slender blades fairies see rainbows ~*~ wheee! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Enjoyed! Well done! [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-09-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Rene Magritte sighs As mountain lakes start to dance Beneath rainbow dreams BRAVO!!! I love it, I thought of this inspirational artist reading this wonderful delightful haiku! I love watching the skies reflect on the water, it shows and reveals so much! (smiles) Beautiful, I love it very much! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SArthurGrey~ Brilliantly done. Generating so much inspiration. *Applause* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh! That is it exactly!!!  All writing comes |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
S Arthur Grey, A stunning haiku! I looooved it! Thank you for sharing TaraB |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Superbly vivid!!!  |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
lovely...can't wait to see more of your haiku |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
JLR, Charisma, Tovi, Gloom, Sunshine, Poeminister, Noah, Marge, Lone Wolf, Tara, VAS, faterider: Thank you all so much for your kind responses! And glad to be inspirational. More nice haiku here. I have a vivid picture of this in my head, and can feel the warm breeze. Too bad I can't send all of that along too. Tovi, I think you can do this. You need two things. Photograph images in your mind and study them. Practice, practice, practice, haiku. I spent the year 2000 attempting to write in haiku only. I wrote virtually nothing else. Now, I can think in haiku, like a language. It worked so well, I may do this again with another form . . . S Arthur |
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