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Friends Upon Passion's Wall (duet with PdV)
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Friends Upon Passion's Wall (duet with PdV) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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in honor of National Friendship Day! let the tasting be the judge the sweetest juice shall be prevailed and no one could nor should be budged From the echoed drum of thought the nagging nag what should be aught.. Every glance a shadow tame in flicker of a red hot flame. the words you find within these walls echo loud to thus proclaim we are all so very different and yet we are the same everything I've ever done was but perpetuation'd sun and every lie I ever told was but the cry of life of old "survivor I," I'll be instead even if I bury dead I'll celebrate their lives again in the imprint mind of "friend" between the now and then lies a life we never knew shared yet unshared in pasts memories unknown of you who thought that minds could be fathomed as one and yet someone like you, someone like me and still we've never met [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 06-09-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank to both of you so much for sharing these beautiful lines of friendship between these walls.... *applause* beautifully expressed. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey, alright, great friendship duet and well written....good stuff! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
If you have never written a duet with serenity, I highly recommend it! The lady can write some killer verses!! And so quickly! And as a note here, she also makes a great friend! (Thanks for listening to my rants!)  |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's wonderful, isn't it... how we can develop such great friendships out of people we've never physically met... Nicely done, ladies...  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I bow to you both my wonderful and poetic friends. . . two of the most fascinating women that I have ever met. . . and two poets who constantly inspire me. . .   --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I'll celebrate their lives again in the imprint mind of "friend" between the now and then lies a life we never knew shared yet unshared in pasts memories unknown of you who thought that minds could be fathomed as one and yet someone like you, someone like me and still we've never met OH how I can well relate. excellent duet you two "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity and PoetdeVine~ The walls to friendship are often scaled on thoughtful words of the ladder of verse~ This is a great affirmation of friendships in reaching out to others. Applauding here ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Very, very nice  to both of you.Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is great you two....friendships made here just seem to be the best....and yeah...serenity is a joy and a devil to write with LOL.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the words you find within these walls echo loud to thus proclaim we are all so very different and yet we are the same =========================== in the imprint mind of "friend" between the now and then lies a life we never knew shared yet unshared in pasts memories unknown of you who thought that minds could be fathomed as one and yet someone like you, someone like me and still we've never met =========================== ~Reflections On These Walls~ In my words are mirrors of me... in your words a reflection of me to see A part of you then claims a part of my heart friendships engraved in time, never to impart. ~~~~~~~~ Beautiful tribute to here and the friendships found with-in these walls. well done Poetess Divine and Serene |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Charisma...hugs to you sweet lady! I thank you much! ethome...thanks as always...hugging at you over here!  gonna try to stick around tonight and read a bit! Sharon...sharon, sharon, sharon...you are such a joy to talk with..er..type with... And folks, this lady is one of the smartest funniest, most compassionate people I've never met! Thank you for all the giggles...love you much! Nan...how the hell are ya? Miss you...and to prove it I showed up in yer workshop again..I am SO consistently inconsistent! lol..hope all is well with you! Thanks Sveetie...(see Sharon? we're FASCINATING) Thank you Sven, you are pretty fascinating yerself!brian...if you followed me home? I'd ask if I could keep ya! thanks me bud!HEY MARGE!!! good to see you here...I owe ya an e, I think! Thanks for spreading your sunshine my way...(we need it BAD here) Titia..I thank you as well...I hope to be checking out your work tonight as well..and if I haven't done so? Welcome to the forum! As you can see, you can make alot of friends here! Janet? you were an inspiration here as well. (you do know I love you, don't you?) I've got some time to catch up tonight...will e ya soon..still trying to beat the storms..(ANOTHER band of showers is expected tonight) sigh...if you still want that water? There's more than enough to go around now! HUGS you!!! and want to thank ALL of my friends here at Passions...you all have been a source of joy and comfort and shared my laughter and my tears. I'm so grateful for you all!  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is a wonderful verse, you two... |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
"survivor I," I'll be instead "even if I bury dead I'll celebrate their lives again in the imprint mind of "friend" between the now and then" I love the above sentiment, and the whole poem. Great job to you both. I can't control |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Excellent and beautiful poetry, well done the both of you Maree |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You are both fantastic, as so is this poem. Sandra |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Sharon, Serenity, nice poem. It's always good to see two of Passions' greatest poets working together. You two have never met? Damnit, organise something and get to it! ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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