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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-06-08 04:01 PM


Come to me Sweet One

If she has no desire
to know who I am.
My life loses purpose.
I feel less a man.
If a measure of her love
I do not inspire
how will I ever become
the man of her desire.
Hello my sweet one.
I love you with all my heart.
Come to me sweet one.
Why must we remain so far apart.
If she likens me not
as her favorite cup of tea
how will my hope grow
while her heart rejects me.
By samuri sword
may I bleed and die
if I ever hurt my sweet one
or bring tears to her eyes.
Hello my sweet one.
I love you with all my heart.
Come to me sweet one.
May we never part.

Jameslee@June08,2001

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ethome
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1 posted 2001-06-08 04:07 PM


A very intense pleading and yearning poem James! I enjoyed the read very much     ethome
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2 posted 2001-06-08 04:08 PM


James....this is so incredibly sweet and tender....I like this very much  
Watersign6
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3 posted 2001-06-08 08:34 PM


very tender,sweet and yearning,lovely poem

Tovi
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4 posted 2001-06-08 08:41 PM


This is just beautiful.  Would melt any heart, I should think!  What a pleasurable read.  
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5 posted 2001-06-08 08:52 PM


JamesMichael,

    Awwwwww! How sweet this is!!! At the time that is the only thing I can think of to say.. awwwwww! Me liked!

TaraB

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6 posted 2001-06-08 09:04 PM


This was so sweet, James.  What a lovely display of emotions.  How can she not love this?  Beyond me!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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7 posted 2002-02-06 01:05 PM




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I just know your Jin will always love this forever! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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