Open Poetry #14 |
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Come to me Sweet One |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Come to me Sweet One If she has no desire to know who I am. My life loses purpose. I feel less a man. If a measure of her love I do not inspire how will I ever become the man of her desire. Hello my sweet one. I love you with all my heart. Come to me sweet one. Why must we remain so far apart. If she likens me not as her favorite cup of tea how will my hope grow while her heart rejects me. By samuri sword may I bleed and die if I ever hurt my sweet one or bring tears to her eyes. Hello my sweet one. I love you with all my heart. Come to me sweet one. May we never part. Jameslee@June08,2001 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A very intense pleading and yearning poem James! I enjoyed the read very much ethome |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James....this is so incredibly sweet and tender....I like this very much ![]() |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
very tender,sweet and yearning,lovely poem ![]() |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
This is just beautiful. Would melt any heart, I should think! What a pleasurable read. ![]() |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
JamesMichael, Awwwwww! How sweet this is!!! At the time that is the only thing I can think of to say.. awwwwww! ![]() TaraB |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was so sweet, James. What a lovely display of emotions. How can she not love this? Beyond me! ![]() All writing comes |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I just know your Jin will always love this forever! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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