Open Poetry #14 |
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Goodbye |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Sometimes, It Is hard to say goodbye, whom you love someone, you don't want to say goodbye, Because It Is hurts you Inside your heart, when you love someone, It Is hard to let go, And you can't do anything, when you have already said goodbye, Someone whom you love, Goodbye, when you said that to me, Goodbye , never meant to be together, When It comes to you, You know alll the love you had It Is over now, Goodbye , when tomorrow comes, loniliness starts to calls, When evening falls, The music begins to play, play the song, we used to sing , together, Goodbye , never see you again, Goodbye , you and I, Saying goodbye to eachother, Goodbye, goodbye forever, |
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angelbear Member
since 2001-05-22
Posts 139North East, USA |
ahhhh so true. I like this. ![]() I can't control |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
One of the most difficult words in the english language. As the song says "where is the good in goodbye?" |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now. . . this hurts. . . sadly written my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes it is hard to say goodbye and hard to keep holding on...James |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
always so hard to say "goodbye" ...captured the sad feelings quite well. (hugs)) Charisma |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I know how it hurts, believe me, I know.....(((((((((((hugs))))))))))))) Kathleen Blake |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very sad but I'm glad you let it all out here so we could read! I know about the pain and I know that time heals and someday you'll wonder why it even hurt you so much, because it won't seem so important then. I know that's not much help but it's the best I've got to offer right now.......thanks for sharing! |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Beautifully written, vandana |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Vandana, this is so very sad, I believe goodbye is the most saddest word in our language, and I pray that now you have found true happiness and you will never have to say goodbye again! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sad but beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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