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vandana
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0 posted 2001-06-08 11:04 AM



Sometimes,
It Is hard
to say goodbye,
whom you love someone,
you don't want
to say goodbye,
Because It Is hurts you
Inside your heart,
when you love someone,
It Is hard
to let go,
And you can't do anything,
when you have already said goodbye,
Someone whom you love,
Goodbye,
when you said that to me,
Goodbye ,
never meant to be together,
When It comes to you,
You know
alll the love you
had It Is over now,
Goodbye ,
when tomorrow comes,
loniliness starts to calls,
When evening falls,
The music begins
to play,
play the song,
we used to sing ,
together,
Goodbye ,
never see you again,
Goodbye ,
you and I,
Saying goodbye to eachother,
Goodbye,
goodbye forever,

© Copyright 2001 vandana - All Rights Reserved
angelbear
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1 posted 2001-06-08 11:10 AM


ahhhh so true. I like this.  

I can't control
my destiny
I trust my soul,
my only goal
is just to "be"
-Lyrics from RENT

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2 posted 2001-06-08 11:13 AM


One of the most difficult words in the english language.  
As the song says "where is the good in goodbye?"

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3 posted 2001-06-08 12:52 PM


now. . . this hurts. . . sadly written my friend. . .

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JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-06-08 03:45 PM


Yes it is hard to say goodbye and hard to keep holding on...James
Charisma
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5 posted 2001-06-08 04:14 PM


always so hard to say "goodbye" ...captured the sad feelings quite well.

(hugs))
Charisma

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6 posted 2001-06-08 04:16 PM


I know how it hurts, believe me, I know.....(((((((((((hugs)))))))))))))

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


ethome
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7 posted 2001-06-08 04:24 PM


Very sad but I'm glad you let it all out here so we could read! I know about the pain and I know that time heals and someday you'll wonder why it even hurt you so much, because it won't seem so important then. I know that's not much help but it's the best I've got to offer right now.......thanks for sharing!
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8 posted 2001-06-08 06:32 PM


Beautifully written, vandana
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9 posted 2002-02-06 01:07 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Vandana, this is so very sad, I believe goodbye is the most saddest word in our language, and I pray that now you have found true happiness and you will never have to say goodbye again! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sad but beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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